Friday, April 11, 2014

My Writing Process (or How the Sausage Is Made)

I met Callie Feyen thanks to Listen to Your Mother DC. Both Callie and I are part of the 2014 cast, and after blog-stalking each other, we founded a mutual admiration society. Callie's writing is meditative and layered and funny. You don't have to take my word for it, either. Check her out at the helpfully titled Callie's Blog. And if you don't think she's the cat's meow, then you can go to hell and die. And let me just tell you, there are no good writers in hell. It's gonna be nothing but Nicholas Sparks and saccharine-drenched first-base erotica for the rest of eternity.

By comparison, my writing is less meditative. It's more, I don't know, shout-y.

To parse out the subtleties of our writing styles, Callie invited me to participate in a blog tour of writers discussing their writing process. So if you've ever wondered how the sausage was made, folks, here goes:

1. What am I working on?


Besides this post? Well, my blog is still in its infancy -- not quite 2 months old. I only post twice per week, but I'm working on new posts constantly. As a blog groupie myself, I get very offended when a blogger posts erratically. I need to know that there will be posts waiting for me on Monday and Wednesday, for instance, so that I can plan when to put the batteries back in my kid's musical toys. I can only stomach the Baby Mozart Hellraiser Music Cube while I'm buried in a good blog. With that in mind, I try to post on the regular (emphasis on "try"). I also try to write longer, meatier posts -- something readers can lose themselves in while the Baby Mozart Hellraiser Music Cube opens a portal to the underworld.

Welcome to the Bundle is pretty lowbrow most of the time, and I'm okay with that. Poop stories are kind of my jam, which is helpful when you're the mom of a toddler. But I also try to find time to coddle my uppity, authoress side too. I'm working on a piece of creative nonfiction about the summer after I graduated from college, when I worked on an archaeological dig in the high desert of Arizona. It's still what I would call a humor piece, but I steer clear of mentioning bodily fluids, so it's pretty classy. Except for the part where a guy at a bus stop tries to buy an hour of "my time" with a six pack of beer. That part is just pure filth.

2. How does my work differ from others in its genre?


Okay, it's about to get confessional, you guys. You've been reading this blog, thinking I'm just a salt-of-the-earth mama with aspirations of selling out her kid for Internet fame. But the truth is (deep breath) I write poetry. I actually have an MFA in poetry. It's not that I don't want to sell my kid out for Internet fame, because I really, really do. It's just that I also like rhyming couplets and rousing sestinas and metaphors. Oh god, the metaphors. Fact: I'm not really telling you how to make sausage; I'm using a metaphor.

Stop judging me!

It took me years before I came out of the closet as a humorist, but I can't quit you, poetry. So, if you look closely, every once in a paragraph or two, you'll find that I lapse into language that aspires to rise above the poop/puke/pee-pee story I've been telling.

3. Why do I write what I do?


I come from a long line of story tellers. Back in the day, all of the neighborhood kids would pile onto my family's front stoop to listen to my dad tell stories. His ghost stories, in particular, were a big hit at slumber parties. I felt proud and awed when my dad got going: embellishing here, adding sound effects there, frequently laughing at himself. Now I'm just chasing that dream of, um, being idolized by middle-schoolers, I guess. So, what I'm saying is that I want to be the Justin Beiber of mommy blogs. Do middle-schoolers still like him? He's a pretty big asshole. What else do tweens like? Too much eyeliner and those Monster energy drinks, maybe? Okay, then that. I want to be the slutty makeup and go-go juice of mommy blogs.

Ugh. Fine. I also just like telling stories, okay? I like that story telling is a communal act, that really good story telling is a game you play with your audience. You need to decipher where the funny bones are, where the soft spots are, and when to hit them and in what order. It's a pretty violent game, but if you play it right, you'll get in a few good belly laughs before anyone bleeds out.

4. How does my writing process work?


Haha. Process. Yeeeeah.

I work part-time and I also have a toddler and a dog and aspirations of resuming an adult relationship with my husband. (An "adult relationship," by the way, means having conversations about the news or about work, not about how Mum Mums taste pretty good dipped in hummus. (Mum Mums, by the way, taste pretty good dipped in hummus.)) Occasionally, I'll pick up a freelance writing or editing gig. I stay busy. My writing process is less a process than a mad scramble.

Sometimes I set my alarm for 5 a.m. I throw on my super-sexy grey velour robe, creep down to the kitchen, make some coffee, and tap out a few paragraphs on my laptop before the kid wakes at 6:30. Sometimes I try to write while Pork Chop is napping. More often, I write after my son has gone to bed, while Shelby whips up dinner.

I keep a notebook on my nightstand, but I found that if I wait until I crawl into bed to write, then I just write about how tired I am or about how I need to be a more disciplined writer. And no one wants to read a story about how I meant to write for an hour but instead fell asleep on the couch while my husband watched Sabado Gigante on Univision. Although, I probably should write a story about my husband's obsession with Sabado Gigante and its amazing mix of near-nudity, awkward product placement, and little people.

The truth is, if I think about my writing, I won't write. I worry that my writing won't be funny or moving or relevant or syntactically coherent. I write before I can talk myself out of it. I write by the seat of my pants. I'm basically having a blackout right now. It's like Zen psychosis.

And that's it, folks. That's the "process." Maybe one day I'll be one of those respectable types who goes to the gym and writes for 2 hours every day (cough, cough, Callie Feyen, cough), but in the meantime, I've made peace with being respectable-curious. I'm one of those types who begrudgingly hunkers down in her cold, dark kitchen; who slugs coffee; who prays her kid will sleep for 30 more minutes; who writes and writes and writes against her own better judgement.

12 comments:

  1. Oh, Jessica. How I love your blog. I would like to join the admiration society, although I would never presume it to be mutual; particularly because I am one of those "erratic posters" that apparently irritates the crap out of you. I wish I wasn't, but I am. Sigh. Anyway, if I can't be part of the society, I will just be a groupie, or maybe president of the fan club (yes..."president of the fan club" has less of a weird connotation than "groupie.") Thank you for sharing your inner sausage-workings. You make me laugh out loud every time I read, and yet, your "poetic-feeling" side most certainly gives your pieces a wonderful depth and dimension. <3

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    1. Holy blog love! The mutual admiration society welcomes you into the fold. I am always caught off guard by your writing, Lisa. I'll be going along, reading, nodding my head in agreement, chuckling, and then you'll lay a line on me that just stops me in my tracks. And I love that.

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  2. The sausage is delicious. Having a process is overrated. And, for the record, there is no such thing as first-base erotica. If it's not a homerun, it's not erotica.

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    1. Well, yes, I would normally agree that it ain't erotica unless a homerun is involved. But, damn, ladies sure do love to get hot under the collar reading about a loving embrace. (Seriously, a loving embrace? I'm pretty sure you could classify my encounter with most donuts as a loving embrace.)

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  3. Well this is just fantastic, as all your posts, Jessica. Thanks for participating, and thank you for your kind words on my writing. I loved learning more about your poetry writing. I was just in a lecture on the importance of using metaphor and the professor suggested keeping a metaphor practice journal. LOVE that! I have a feeling you'd be great at helping me with that.

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    1. A metaphor journal sounds like a lot of nerdy fun! I think coffee and metaphor brainstorming session are in order.

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  4. Jess: I read and reread this latest blog and as usual thoroughly enjoyed it. It touched me immensely. I see a sensitivity and delicacy underneath the hilarious and loving satire you present to the world as your genre. Your writing is brilliant, Jess, and is its own form of poetry.
    The family story telling continues...............Love, Aunt Judy

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    1. Thanks, Aunt Judy. You know I have big shoes to fill in the story telling department.

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  5. Jess. I just want to reassure you that no matter how much poop, pee, or snot you write about, you will always have more class that Kim and I combined. Oddly enough, I think we are proud of that. So hears to you NOT putting the ass in class. Keep up the fabulous storytelling!

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    1. Having more class than you and Kim isn't exactly a brag-able achievement. BOOM! (Love you like a sister, sister.)

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  6. You mean that some people actually have a writing PRACTICE? Like they plan out posts and stuff? Huh. I'm with you. I do it when I can, and often in a 1/2-assed effort blackout state. Not that your writing is 1/2-assed because it's clearly whole-assed and awesome. Wait, did that come out the way I wanted it to? I love your writing.

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    1. "Whole-assed" is one of the finest compliments I've yet received, Kristi. And it feels so accurate somehow. I think you just coined a new term, the definition of which is "purposeful, but crass and prone to self-deprication."

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